To Err Is Human

April 21st, 2011

Update

The sec­ond print­ing of Modernist Cuisine started rolling off the presses at the end of March. Customers will start receiv­ing the first books from that new print run in July. Our cur­rent order is 25,000 copies. We hope that sat­is­fies demand, but we were wrong once before, and we may be wrong again. We are mon­i­tor­ing the sit­u­a­tion and will order more books if it seems warranted.

In our orig­i­nal plan, we thought that the 6,000 copies of the first print­ing would give us some time and extra eyes to find any typo­graph­i­cal errors. We had many copy edi­tors and proof­read­ers to help us pore over the book, but after the nth read­ing, you become blind to any fur­ther errors. Ultimately, the way that remain­ing errors in a book are found is by readers.

Unfortunately, the enor­mous demand for MC and the unex­pected delays in ship­ping the books to cus­tomers meant that we had very lit­tle time, with very few read­ers, to find errors. By the time we had to send our final files to press for the sec­ond print run, fewer than 2,000 copies were in cus­tomers’ hands.

I posted on eGul­let that I was inter­ested in find­ing errors. We received sev­eral responses from Chris Amirault, Chris Hennes, and oth­ers in the thread, “Cooking with Modernist Cuisine.” These responses were very helpful.

But then we started get­ting emails from Larry Lofthouse. Like so many peo­ple I’ve met on eGul­let, I don’t know much about him per­son­ally. What I do know is that Larry is an error-finding machine—he started send­ing me an email almost every hour with mis­takes he had found. Some weren’t really errors, but just appeared so. Others were cos­metic issues or word­ing changes that are a judg­ment call, but some were real, honest-to-goodness goofs. Frankly, I’m embar­rassed by some of them, but I’m glad they were found.

Finding errors caused a dilemma. The sec­ond print­ing was just about to start; we had a cou­ple days at most to make the final changes. So I emailed Larry to let him know about our sit­u­a­tion. He went into high gear, as did the whole MC team. We worked night and day and wound up scrub­bing the entirety of MC. Then we cor­rected and reproofed every­thing Larry and the oth­ers had found and (just barely) made our press deadline.

Larry did all of this work because it seemed to him like the right thing to do. He never asked for any­thing in return, but we are so grate­ful that we’re giv­ing him a copy of the sec­ond print­ing, and we have invited him and a guest over for din­ner at the lab later in April. Thousands of peo­ple will have a bet­ter expe­ri­ence with MC due to Larry’s efforts.

That’s not to say that we have now cor­rected every last error, how­ever. Indeed, in the days since the presses started run­ning again, we, Larry, and other read­ers have iden­ti­fied a few more mis­takes. If and when we under­take a third print­ing, we’ll cor­rect those, too.

In the mean­time, we are mak­ing avail­able here a list of cor­rec­tions and clar­i­fi­ca­tions for the first print­ing. We’ll update this list when­ever new goofs are spot­ted. It’s avail­able in PDF for­mat as well, in case you want to print it out or have a handy search­able ver­sion on your com­puter. If you spot a mis­take in your copy that isn’t already men­tioned here, please send it in.


18 Responses to To Err Is Human

  1. I just got my copy at noon today and spent the entire day just flip­ping through. MC is as SPECTACULAR as all the press–and thanks for the cor­rec­tions. It was fun to see the unpack­ing video as a reminder of my own ini­tial dis­cov­ery. Now . . . the jour­ney begins. Profound thanks to the entire team.

  2. err is human ... to what point ? ... in this case it’s to much, to many errors ... so many, and i believe there is still a lot to dis­cover .. how much should we pay to have the right recipes ??? you are self indul­gent ... to say “to err is human” is inde­cent ... eliane franc

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  4. Errata to the errata: in the cor­rec­tion to the Carbonated Mojito Spheres, the page is listed as 4•189; it’s actu­ally 4•188.

    (and eliane... find me a cook­book with fewer errors per page! And a huge num­ber of these errors are typos in the scal­ing per­cent­ages, if you are care­ful they won’t affect you at all.)

    • and chris ... again your answer is light to my eyes and doesn’t fit with the rest of your pur­pose ... you take years and many peo­ple to make this book and it’s sci­en­tific and so this so that so so expan­sive and etc etc ...... and i not some­one able to spot the errors eas­ily, i mean i am not sup­pose to be care­ful, you do ... and again i might said to err is human ... not you ... you would never have those words dur­ing the adver­tis­ing period .......... you present your­self and the book as some­thing dif­fer­ent, as “THE BOOK” of the moder­nity ... and in my point of vue and for many many rea­sons, it’s not, it’s another prod­uct, made in china ........... just another book ... with many errors as in any other book ... tagli­atelle and spaghetti are two dif­fer­ents things ...... have a nice day

  5. I’ve got the first edi­tion, but will soon for­get this blog entry. A lot of the cor­rec­tions are minor, but some are impor­tant. Would you be kind enough to also cre­ate a pdf file with just the impor­tant changes? That would be a doc­u­ment more use­ful to print out.

    • Each reader will have a dif­fer­ent view of what is impor­tant. Those who are con­cerned pri­mar­ily with cor­rec­tions to recipes should focus on the pages in vol­ume 6 (the Kitchen Manual) with changes, as that is where nearly all the recipes in the book are collected.

      • A team sits down and goes through the list. Spelling and gram­mar are minor. Temperature, ingre­di­ents, etc. are major. Seems like most errors are minor. If peo­ple stopped doing work just because there are dif­fer­ences in opin­ion, not much would be done in this world. I hon­estly, think my sug­ges­tion would be very use­ful for most readers.

  6. Gross! That list of cor­rec­tions stinks like a tur­ducken left out on the counter in a heat wave for a week. The so-called writ­ers, edi­tors, and pub­lish­ers of that book should be force-fed Kraft Dinner with cut-up boiled wieners and microwave pizza pops for a year. (OK, KD lovers, please don’t write to me about that comment—I enjoy KD once in a while, too, but not with wein­ers or for a whole year.)

    “Modernist Cuisine is the prod­uct of human beings. And like all human cre­ations, it con­tains imper­fec­tions.” Are you kid­ding me? For a book about cook­ing to be so rid­dled with fac­tual errors is inex­cus­able, and the tele­phone direc­tory of cor­rec­tions hardly makes up for it. I mean, if I were cook­ing a dish and had to refer to the errata or risk flame-broiling it instead of warm­ing it…

    Thanks for post­ing this, Jeanne. It points up the need for rig­or­ous copy edit­ing and fact check­ing. Where the hell did you find it? These days, ama­teurs can cob­ble together bad con­tent and pub­lish it, and this list illus­trates the point per­fectly. In this case, they’re pub­lish­ing under the tony ban­ner of “mod­ernist cui­sine,” even cit­ing Monet/Manet, Jean-Georges Vongerichten, and Linnaeus—yet, rather than reas­sur­ing read­ers, the errors blare: “crap,” “tripe,” and even “raw.”

    And Mary, thanks for your well-taken obser­va­tion about “waste.” Ugh!

    I’m no great fan of MSWord, but it’s obvi­ous that the “edi­tors” didn’t even bother with a basic spelling and gram­mar check, which would have caught many of these infe­lic­i­ties, includ­ing word dupli­ca­tion (at least with the words beside each other).

    I have to go throw up now.

    • Thank you, Modernist Cuisine, for hav­ing the egg yolks to post a rant from a hard-core copy edi­tor with three decades’ expe­ri­ence. If you ever again find your­selves short of time or copy edi­tors and cook­book spe­cial­ists, I can assem­ble a crack team that could down that sub­ma­rine of errors in a microwave minute and make you look like a five-star chef. Just say the word.

  7. No mat­ter how com­pre­hen­sive the con­tent or how beau­ti­ful the pho­tog­ra­phy, such slop­pi­ness is akin to a gen­tle­man in a bespoke suit with a ketchup stain on his silk tie, or a lady in a cou­ture gown with a huge run in her stock­ing: it ruins the over­all impres­sion for dis­cern­ing readers.

  8. Waiter, there’s a fly...and a hair...and a used Band-Aid in my lob­ster bisque.

  9. OK there are errors, but did any­one ever buy “French Cooking” by Paul Bocuse (1977)? unread­able, pro­por­tions not based in real­ity, gross mea­sure­ment errors, trans­la­tions that make no sense
    It was donated to Goodwill–someone will enjoy the dozen photos.

    This book is com­mend­able; with the inter­net the authors and read­ers can share cor­rec­tions quickly. And, thanks for adding the bean sprouts to the Pad Thai.

  10. MC is pub­lished with­out the sup­port infra­struc­ture of a tra­di­tional pub­lisher. Just to get this mam­moth book to the printer is a real achieve­ment already.
    It just shows that if you can self-publish MC one can pub­lish anything!

  11. This amount of errata is pretty good for a work of such size. I’d be amazed if a book like The Joy Of Cooking didn’t have at least as many errors per page in its first print­ing. It’s usual for sci­en­tific book pub­lish­ers to release errata lists and that’s what Kitchen Lab has done here. Cookbook read­ers not used to this prac­tice might think there are a lot of errors but com­pared to typ­i­cal text­books it’s really not that many.

    It’s unfor­tu­nate that quite a few are in vol. 6, the kitchen man­ual. Maybe the Lab can offer cor­rected ver­sions of vol 6 for sale to peo­ple who have bought the full set. That vol­ume prob­a­bly should be offered sep­a­rately any­way since it will be the vol­ume most vul­ner­a­ble to kitchen acci­dents, so peo­ple may need to replace it once in a while.

  12. A link on the home page to the errata pdf would be help­ful. I imag­ine it will be updated mul­ti­ple times, and it’s frus­trat­ing to have to find this blog post each time I want to check for updates.

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